What do you think of this poem?? please answer :\?

Poems don't need to rhyme. Overall, I really liked it, especially the beginning, I could just sense and picture everything. Nicely done. I will say I do not like that winter gets killed and in the next line you say you know it will be back. Things that are dead don't come back. I would say sleep. Winter is going to sleep or something that refers to the hiatus of cold. Again, well done!